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f4saknwretch - 2004-09-12 03:38:52
I'm still trying to figure out a comment for this one.. (some words hit deeper than others).... and now after some writing.. I think I've got something to be proud of..............................//Just write about your feelings -- not the things you never did / Inexperience -- it once had cursed me / But your youth is no handicap -- it's what makes you thirsty// That almost made me cry, I admit.. I remember when I was kid, I would say just about anything... and of course, I knew everything. Nowadays, I go a whole day without opening my mouth to even say good morning to the day, much less know any damn thing... And while I would not go back to my lack of discernment and understanding (plenty of times I got in trouble for telling people they'd go to hell because they smoked, lol. I just didn't quite get that something being bad for one doesn't make it a damnable offense.. something I haven't quite learned formyself, I think), I do wish I hadn't acquired this aversion to talking. And it made me think of something else.. weaving my way through your links again (some which I'd seen and some which were pleasantly new).. I came across your child inside.. I came across you. and it reminded me of a song (like waving because someone might wave back.. I smile because someone might smile back).. a song (Creed lyrics - Don't Stop Dancing) that I listen to when I need someone to tell me not to give up. someone to tell me to keep on dancing.. (that's what often feel like you tell me.. one child to another child.. when I read your words).. "I've been through everything... and now I'm on my knees again... But I know I must go on. Though I hurt. I must be strong... because inside... I know that many feel this way... So, children... Don't stop dancing. Believe you can fly... Am I hiding, in the shadows? Forget the pain. Forget the sorrows.. because you know you must go on. Although you hurt... You must be strong... because inside... We know.. that many feel this way. So, Never stop dancing. Always. Believe you can fly. Away... Away" (just so you know, that's not quite the words of the song.. I wrote what I heard in my heart.. though the artist says it differently.. I'm sure we both mean the same thing).
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candora - 2004-09-12 17:21:04
you hear me... that is the most beautiful and precious gift I can receive... what more can I do than sigh... this comes to mind (actually, the last one would have been a song called "I wonder what would happen to this world" by Harry Chapin, but I couldn't find it in my lyrics online and when I was looking through the lyrics so many were appropriate for this particular mood you've inspired that I just decided to smile at this one and remember that the soundtrack of my mind continues)... thank you :)
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candora - 2004-09-12 17:31:28
ummm, I meant... thiscomes to mind (and this last was included in respect for your beliefs)...
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